Score: 5

"Solid Entry"

submission: I need a Hero

date: May 25, 2009

The premise is a good one. The artwork is good, but the fluidity of the animation is a bit stilted at times. Movements seem labored and repetitive at times. While the actual style is fine as it is, perhaps some work on the transitions in movement would help a great deal. This fluidity would also greatly benefit this type of piece when the song starts to pick up, so that the action would match pace with the song.

Overall, a competent piece fit to its song well, with no serious flaws. I look forward to seeing more from you.

Score: 7

"Highly Impressive Inaugural Flash"

submission: Emo Girl

date: November 19, 2008

While the lack of a preloader and replay button hinder it somewhat, it seems like plenty of people have told you that already, so just keep learning until you get those techniques down.

As for style, it was good and a bit more unique than usual, albeit rudimentary. If you were to practice on polishing it up just a bit, it would be beneficial.

The music flowed well, and fit the mood of the scenes., and sounds effects would be useless in this type of work.

However, the length of this piece negatively affects it. Were part two a bit longer, it would be great.

However, if this is your first entry, I am sure you will only make better and better submissions. I greatly look forward to the next batch of your work. Keep it up.

Score: 10

"Marvelous"

submission: Nothing In My Way Collab

date: October 18, 2008

Good song selection, excellent stylizing, and a very nice mix-up of animation styles. Also, great lip-synching, and transitioning. There isn't anything to imrpove upon here, really. Your only problem is probably a small target audience that appreciates this work for how good it is. Overall, a fantastic piece of work. Thank you for submitting it.

Score: 10

"Excellent"

submission: Sax

date: October 27, 2008

A truly marvelous piece. Has a great sound and beat. This is my all-time favorite audio submission.